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This is something I've been working on story for. But trying to squeeze it in this one image did not work.

The timing was off when I tried to put a suspenseful background story when I can already see the highlight of it. And the rest needed to be more showing than telling. Describing only made it feel repetitive and diminishing for me.

I might make a short graphic novel out of the story and use this as a cover image.

For now, following link is to my other story drafts: https://vorentacle.blogspot.com/2022/04/story-041322-drafts.html